The Benefits of Reducing…

It’s been a while since I encountered any notably bad copy in the course of my day job as a proofreader. I was beginning think I’d jumped the gun by creating a whole blog category for material that seemed to be on the wane. Then this morning I encountered the following gem, which isn’t technically “egregious corporate-speak,” but certainly does have a problem:

This self-guided overview… focuses on the benefits of reducing re-key of data and order accuracy.

That sounds great, doesn’t it? I can certainly see how reducing order accuracy would generate all kinds of benefits…
ADDENDUM: Here’s another example from the same document:

The Query Operators section [of this document] is useful in providing guidance on getting better search results; particularly valuable when searching.

Yes, I can see how it would be…

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